Đề thi và bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 4/3/2017

Đề thi và bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 4/3/2017

"Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion." là đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 4/3/2017. Sau đây là 2 bài mẫu band 7 và band 8 để bạn tham khảo.

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Bài mẫu Band 8:

Useful vocabulary:

  1. Third world countries: những nước đang phát triển
  2. Consultancy: tư vấn
  3. To provide financial assistance: cung cấp sự hỗ trợ về mặt tiền bạc
  4. External monetary flow: dòng tiền từ nước ngoài
  5. Executive bodies: những cơ quan hành pháp
  6. Infrastructural development: sự phát triển cơ sở hạ tầng
  7. Stagnation: sự trì trệ
  8. To foster economic progress: đẩy mạnh phát triển kinh tế
  9. Foreign cash injections: lượng tiền hỗ trợ từ nước ngoài
  10. Administration systems: hệ thống điều hành
  11. To play supervisory roles in: đóng vai trò quản lý
  12. Diplomacy: ngoại giao
  13. The resolution of concerning internal issues: sự giải quyết những vấn đề đáng lo ngại trong nước
  14. Professional and systematic education and training programs: những chương trình đào tạo và giáo dục bài bản và chuyên nghiệp

Outline

Đây là dạng discussion + opinion yêu cầu người viết cần bàn luận về CẢ 2 MẶT đã được đề cập đến ở đề bài cũng như đưa ra ý kiến của mình xem trong 2 mặt mình đồng ý với mặt nào nhiều hơn.

Sample

Như vậy với vế đầu tiên, 2 ý đầu sẽ được chọn để viết trong phần thân bài. Ý kiến của mình về chọn 1 trong 2 vế phải rõ ràng xuyên suốt toàn bài essay.

There is a difference of opinions on what kind of help is more necessary for third world countries. In my view, support in the form of money shows less practicality than other types of useful aid and consultancy.

On the one hand, I understand why some people argue it is best to provide financial assistance for developing countries. Firstly, external monetary flowenables executive bodies of those countries to carry out a variety of functions, for example infrastructural development, social healthcare, water and power supplies. This would help avoid stagnation and foster economic progress. Secondly, when state income from taxes is inadequate, foreign cash injectionsare vital to maintain effective administration systems by paying standard salaries for governmental staff members who play supervisory roles in all sections of a nation.

On the other hand, I would side with those who believe other forms of assistance should be given. Sustainable growth does not merely depend on money, but on how a country is governed and directed, particularly diplomacy and the resolution of concerning internal issues like poverty, crime, or unemployment. In this spectrum, less developed countries certainly do not have enough experience, which emphasizes the need for direction and consultancy from experienced organizations. Furthermore, even if financially supported, third world countries still need experts in the fields of science, law and medicine in order to encourage their development. However, scientists, lawyers and doctors can only be trained, andprofessional and systematic education and training programs are therefore more practical and suitable in the context of developing nations.

In conclusion, owing to the aforementioned arguments, it seems to me that instead of monetarily assisting poor countries, global help should come in other forms such as advice and training courses.

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Bài mẫu Band 7:

Many people believe that third word countries need financial support from the international community whereas others take the opposite view and claims that developing nations need education, infra structure development, health care and community based development programs. While practical aid and policy programs have their own merits I would argue that financial aid plays an integral role in supporting poor countries.

On the one hand, community based programs and strategic advice are extremely important for developing countries. One reason is that, practical aid programs such as vaccination to prevent major diseases, developing medical and education centers and supporting structures are needed to resolve existing social problems. For example, thousands of vulnerable children in Africa have been saved by International aid programs from agencies such as the International Cross Organization and Doctors Without Border.s Organization provide aid which has proven successful in rescuing the general population from these countries from disease and starvation. Another reason is that most national leaders have their own limited vision or knowledge of strategic development. Expert Consultants from international groups could help them optimize and manage development policies for all programs. This would be a positive impact on all aspects of their country's programs. The result would lead the nation to future prosperity for their citizens.

On the other hand, I would argue that financial support from the international community plays a significant role for poor nations. Firstly, if the governments had enough money in their budgets, they could promote small businesses for people with low interest loan. The result being, many people could make ends meet and stop the poverty cycle. Secondly, traffic infrastructure in poor countries could be improved by investing aid money to build concrete roads, highways and bridges which could connect the remote areas to cities. Therefore, trading and traveling could help increase rural development and the economy. Furthermore, aid money could be used to improve the educational system so that universal education could be implemented. When children are educated and can use their knowledge, it helps develop much needed career prospects for the future.

In conclusion, although specifiic aid and consultants are beneficial in some ways for developing countries, I believe that financial support is more beneficial for third word countries.

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